Posted by dottikam at ip68-96-188-7.lv.lv.cox.net on October 19, 2003 at 15:33:46:
Hey, my friend and I wrote the first intro pages to a new screenplay. It's only four pages. Will you please read it and tell me what you think.
I should say, there are currently some camera shots and stuff written into the scene. Those things will be worked out after the first draft is completed. I'm just wondering if the basic action and dialogue work for people right now.
Like, does it make you want to read on, do you find the dialogue provocative? Or, is it complete shite?
It's posted at http://www.xanga.com/japrufrock, or just follow the link below.
Thanks!