Posted by Eyes Only at host-38-241-27-217.pobox.net.uk on October 21, 2003 at 18:31:38:
In Reply to: howabout if i just post the rest? posted by grizzly on October 21, 2003 at 18:26:47:
: 14. Its lobby is huge its one of the largest hotels in North America."
~~~14. Its lobby is huge, it's one of the largest hotels in North America."
The second 'its' is a contraction of 'it is' and should therefore be it's. Plus there should be a comma after huge as it separates a clause from the main sentence.