Posted by TPaquin at cache-rk04.proxy.aol.com on March 12, 2003 at 19:16:31:
In Reply to: I read a little posted by the guy who is here on March 12, 2003 at 19:12:47:
: Did you even read it yourself? There's a lot of grammar mistakes in there. I started reading it and got really bored. It seems like you have lots of film references just for the sake of having them. I’m willing to bet there is a moment or two were the characters reference themselves and break the “fourth wall”.
: “I am Darth Vader, from the planet Vulcan” Where have I seen that line before? Where did it come from , or did you write it? It seems very familiar to me.
: Bruce and Clark, C’mon, please.
: Review it and rewrite it and rewrite it again, before even think about shooting anything.
Hey, you're right about the Characters referencing themselves, but this post was the most discouraging, because this was my sixth draft.