Posted by the guy who is here at user-377.bbd17tcl.dsl.pol.co.uk on March 12, 2003 at 19:12:47:
In Reply to: The Script that I asked if I could post posted by TPaquin on March 12, 2003 at 18:56:37:
Did you even read it yourself? There's a lot of grammar mistakes in there. I started reading it and got really bored. It seems like you have lots of film references just for the sake of having them. I’m willing to bet there is a moment or two were the characters reference themselves and break the “fourth wall”.
“I am Darth Vader, from the planet Vulcan” Where have I seen that line before? Where did it come from , or did you write it? It seems very familiar to me.
Bruce and Clark, C’mon, please.
Review it and rewrite it and rewrite it again, before even think about shooting anything.