Posted by Kimberlieo at 209.50.129.181 on February 10, 2003 at 14:55:27:
In Reply to: Save a life. Critique a script. posted by Raikus on February 10, 2003 at 13:12:43:
: Well, just that last part really. If you've got 4 minutes (literally, the script is only 10 pages long) click on the link and read the script "In a Day." It's a suspense/thriller.
: Questions to consider:
: Do the flashback/fantasy sequences work?
: Should the end be expounded upon?
: As always, any feedback would be excellent. I'll begin shooting, fingers crossed, in mid-March.