Posted by mwskc22 at 134.193.26.75 on February 10, 2003 at 14:08:55:
In Reply to: Save a life. Critique a script. posted by Raikus on February 10, 2003 at 13:12:43:
You've got a very good screenplay that's fairly easy to read. I've no comment on your flashback sequences. I do, however, think the ending needs a little work.
: Questions to consider:
: Do the flashback/fantasy sequences work?
: Should the end be expounded upon?
Good luck on your project. RESPECT!