Posted by Raikus at cas02.mkethn01.fl.comcast.net on February 10, 2003 at 13:12:43:
Well, just that last part really. If you've got 4 minutes (literally, the script is only 10 pages long) click on the link and read the script "In a Day." It's a suspense/thriller.
Questions to consider:
Do the flashback/fantasy sequences work?
Should the end be expounded upon?
As always, any feedback would be excellent. I'll begin shooting, fingers crossed, in mid-March.