Posted by afaurote at 206.230.122.65 on November 06, 2002 at 23:12:50:
In Reply to: I dont know... How about run on sentences NT posted by Runshouse21 on November 06, 2002 at 23:07:11:
: : It hurts my fucking eyes to read sloppy shit like this, so until you learn punctuation, grammar, spelling, sentence structure, and paragraph structure, you'd better put your aspirations for a writing career on hold. When people write like this, I can't go beyond a sentence or two before I quit.
But I'm a huge nerd and checked it over. I'm pretty sure he's clean. He just likes his sub-ordinate clauses. They're all complete thoughts and it would take a lot of re-wording to chop the sentences up. As it is worded, there are no places to break them.