Independent Movie

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Posted by Wazzlehog at wv-ohkl-ubr-a-024-197-073-062.charterwv.net on June 05, 2002 at 17:26:55:

I don't post much, but I've read the summaries and stuff. I just usually lurk. Anyway, I'm 14, but I'd like to get started with some films after I get a camera in a few months. The thing is, I finished a script called Independent Movie, and I've shown it to a lot of my friends. They all seem to like it... of course, they also thought Scary Movie 2 kicked ass, so that shows you how much I can value their opinion. I know that a lot of people here are filmmakers or aspiring filmmakers theirselves, and I'd like some input on it. I do know a lot of the stuff that won't work and is bad though from re-reading it, and they'll be changed in the 2nd draft. I have about 3 papers full of changes that'll be made to the 2nd draft.

Also, it's formatted weird... I know how to do the correct movie script format now, but I used the one from the Jay & Silent Bob Strike Back script book, except with Courier New as the font. So, please check it out and tell me what you think. Get at least to the scene that starts at Page 33, because that's what everyone so far has said is their favorite part.

Independent Movie script

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some quick tips from a fellow screenwriter DRD #37 17:35:50 6/05/02 (5)
- Re: some quick tips from a fellow screenwriter Wazzlehog 17:48:11 6/05/02 (4)
  - excellent, my young apprentice...very excellent NT DRD #37 17:51:40 6/05/02 (3)
    - Re: excellent, my young apprentice...very excellen Wazzlehog 18:30:54 6/05/02 (2)
      - i'd get a copyright first...... DRD #37 18:35:09 6/05/02 (1)
        
        Re: i'd get a copyright first...... silent_bob2u2 21:06:47 6/05/02 (0)

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: I don't post much, but I've read the summaries and stuff. I just usually lurk. Anyway, I'm 14, but I'd like to get started with some films after I get a camera in a few months. The thing is, I finished a script called Independent Movie, and I've shown it to a lot of my friends. They all seem to like it... of course, they also thought Scary Movie 2 kicked ass, so that shows you how much I can value their opinion. I know that a lot of people here are filmmakers or aspiring filmmakers theirselves, and I'd like some input on it. I do know a lot of the stuff that won't work and is bad though from re-reading it, and they'll be changed in the 2nd draft. I have about 3 papers full of changes that'll be made to the 2nd draft. : Also, it's formatted weird... I know how to do the correct movie script format now, but I used the one from the Jay & Silent Bob Strike Back script book, except with Courier New as the font. So, please check it out and tell me what you think. Get at least to the scene that starts at Page 33, because that's what everyone so far has said is their favorite part.

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