Posted by GuinnessGuy(poolboy) at balkamp.com on April 17, 2002 at 10:16:11:
In Reply to: Thanks! I think I need to make it longer though nt posted by ebas420 on April 17, 2002 at 10:15:15:
the ending seems sudden, and your use of language changes slightly toward they end. Almost seems rushed.
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