Posted by I+D at 195.112.8.248 on February 22, 2002 at 13:35:10:
Hi, I'm new to this board but am a huge Kevin Smith fan.
Anyway I need some help from you guys.
I am trying to write a screenplay but have run into difficulties.
I can write good lines but can't turn it into a coherent plot.
Here's a sample piece of dialogue
Drexel: What? [Ian whispers something into Drexel’s ear.] Okay, this dude told me to tell you that you’re out of Microchips. [Ian whispers again in Drexel’s ear.] And Walkers crisps. But don’t worry; Ian’s got enough polo’s for everyone.
[Ian picks his sports bag full of polo’s up and shows it to Sean]
Can you give me some help guys.
Thanks.