Posted by gummyman at pm3a-197.colstrip.mcn.net on August 26, 2001 at 12:00:06:
In Reply to: guys plz check this scene out i just wrote posted by SteJer6 on August 26, 2001 at 03:06:45:
: ok so i just wrote this scene as it came to me, and try to imagine it being in a movie, becuase in text it may be stupid--------
: a plane
: the camera goes down the isle until it stops near the end and focuses on two ppl sitting next to each other
: in the background u can see 2 other men sitting next to each other. the voices are hearable, but not the focus:
: one man aches and holds his heart
: other man "whats wrong?"
: "heartburn, i cant find any medicine that works"
: "try zantec75"
: "i think i should talk to a doctor about this"
: "ya just did"
:
: (whole time camera is on 2 other men, not these)
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