Posted by CraigStone at user-2ives34.dialup.mindspring.com on April 14, 2001 at 22:36:31:
In Reply to: ATTN: Anyone who wants to read a funny script... posted by Rat_37 on April 12, 2001 at 17:27:38:
It was ok, but I haven't read that much pointless conversation since "A Separate Peace" (John Knowles SUCKS!). Anyway, back to your script. There were too many scene changes early on. The audience needs to get familiar to one scene. Also, cut out some of the conversing, and add some more content.
However, that's just my stupid opinion.
--Craig (writing a script called 4 Dumb White Guys. It's only 5 pages long, so I really shouldn't criticize others)