Posted by MK at 208.130.69.196 on July 18, 2000 at 16:57:15:
In Reply to: Need some critcism posted by Assassin on July 18, 2000 at 16:29:50:
After the first few paragraphs I lost interest....You need to make the characters more likeable.or atleast more interesting..they all sounded like cardboard cutouts....You asked...
: I was wondering if you guys/gals wouldn't mind checking out somethign that i wrote for my video productions class eariler this year. Its a script, it won't take long. And if you do, if you could give me some feedback. Its called DayDreams. Thanks in advance.